１月後半の英文添削課題
(１/３１日までにご応募ください)
以下の問題に答えるエッセイを記述してください
What changes would you like to see in the education system in Japan or in other countries?
Make sure to include specific reasons to support your opinion.
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サンプル英文
Generally speaking, I think the education system in Japan is quite good. However, I believe
that more technology should be used in the classroom. Technological tools are beneficial for
teachers, students, and society as a whole.
For teachers, computers and/or mobile devices reduce the workload. These technologies make
it easier to keep track of student information and manage administrative tasks. Teachers
can spend more time developing curriculum and creating more interesting lesson plans.
The overall quality of instruction will improve.
For students, technology makes school more interesting and improves the motivation to learn.
The ability to create and use things like video and audio with computers and tablets empowers
students to develop useful skills for the future. Also, the ability for students to use
the Internet and communicate with the teacher and each other digitally makes learning much
more fun.
For society in general, digitally literate citizens are more productive citizens. People
educated with digital devices usually have a broader skill set, and are more employable. They
are totally comfortable with technology in any situation. To a digital citizen, technology
is a tool, not an obstacle.
In conclusion, I think the best way to improve the education system in Japan is to put more
technology in the classroom. Technology helps teachers create better lessons, helps students
develop more skills and motivation, and helps build a more productive society.
