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.Remove 'although' so you don't have to put all the information into one sentence. It's easier to understand if you don't put too much information in a single sentence. |
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All you need is the title to the previous movie. |
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You should give a reason why your expectations were high. |
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We don't usually use 'satisfied' to refer to how we feel about a movie. You could use 'I loved both movies' or 'Both movies were really good'. |
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| You mention two movies in the first paragraph so you need to make it clear which movie you are talking about. |
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| You can use the verb (assimilate) to be more direct and to the point. |
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You can use present tense (solves) to make the story more alive. |
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| We usually use 'actor' for both men and women. |
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| 'Fiction' and 'nonfiction' are more commonly used as genres. |
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| We usually use 'everyone' in a positive sentence. |
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| Nice work. I enjoyed both of the movies as well. |
