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Hi Mari,
How are you doing?
You told me that you read many books do a lot of reading recently.
After I read your email, I felt like reading something, then I went to a public library. The library is the biggiest in Chuo ward. After I spend spent an hour reading magazines, I borrowed two books about interior design. My house is very old, so I wanted to coordinate the colors. I have no artistic sense, however. Are you good at color-coordinate color-coordinating? If so, let me know the tips some tips.
Anyway, I hope you have a nice relaxing weekend.
Yuko
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If your friend spend much time reading various books, you can say "do a lot of reading".
Very naturally expressed.
'Interior design' is what the book was about.
"color-coordinate" is a verb, so it should be "color-coordinating".
There is a wide variety of tips, so 'some tips' is correct.
A very nice sentiment.
Good job, Yuko. You too, enjoy the weekend.